"Te iubesc."
Those words hold torment;
Those words hold pain;
Those word hold warmth...
They hold love.
And so they taught me;
they showed me
how my life would be like.
they showed the pain; the sorrow
lighting like a candle
showing me that I do live.
Author notes
He cheated on me over and over. He said that line to some many other women. It made me happy to hear him say it, but Reminded me of how he hurt me.
How is it?
Comments
-
Omg! I'm sowwie about the way he hurt you, it obviously wasn't right. Find another man who can show you more love than he ever did, a man who can be faithful and loyal and amazing to you. I like the way the poem flowed and sowwie to have to say, I kinda think it needs more to it, doesn't seem like it's finished but keep penning and thanks for sharing.

-
-
Thank you for the advice. Maybe I will revisit it soon. Though I don't think I can relate to the original sentiment that created it.
-


