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Gone

Head reeling, hands shaking,
all walls around me are slowly breaking.
Deep breaths, nice and slow,
find a distraction to soften the blow.
Voices whispering in my head
remind me of every last thing you said.
Can't focus on anything but you,
and all the things you used to do.
I need to forget you and move on,
but I can't accept that you're really gone.

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  • Wutz Luv
    November 12
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    Nice write, heartbreaking, I know this feeling well.


  • Tqop
    November 3
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    I'm so sorry to hear that. I find John 5:28,29 to be very comforting to me.
    Nicely penned poem.