"How would you feel if no one listened?"
Sit here speaking but no one will listen.
It's eating inside me,
it's just like screaming.
I lay there thinking
"Am I dreaming?"
It's so abusive like a beating.
Checking the wounds
"look, am I bleeding?"
A throbing headache not wanting more.
Like a horror film filled with blood and gore.
Every day waiting for a cure
but there's no answer anymore.
Always labeled "Just Falling Apart".
"Can you replace my broken heart?"
Oh, it's not there; it's in his hands.
But we all know that I'm just damned.
Make me better, make me strong.
I don't have all that long.
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I'm so sick of being sick
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very strong piece here, last two lines really catch you. i miss you.
<3 your burnt cracka
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Thanks pinky
i miss you sooo much <3 your liquid paper cracker
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Powerful and rife with emotion...my heart is heavy reading this. I hope things will get better. All in all, a wonderful write and well-expressed.
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thank you so much, I'm working very hard to make sure things do get better, and they will. Again, thanks, and I like your pic
hope all is well
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all is well, all is well
Except that there is no real food in the dorm 
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I wish you had texting, I'm sick right now, I don't think you'd want to hear my stuffyness. I wish I could help, it's not healthy to live on stuff like peanut butter and potato chips......ah poop, now I'm wanting potato chips....hope to hear from you soon
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this is a terrific write!
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thank you
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so depressing! but a good piece here!!
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thanks so much
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this is good, you can feel the emotion in it and its a vey sad one, i hope things change for the good
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thank you very much for your kind words by the way, love the pic
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