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I cant

Im so nervous i can not sleep
all i want to do is weep

Because you dont love me

Author notes

another poem about the same person if you wanna know what i mean veiw

im not
i still
please
i am no good

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  • maybeillgohome
    November 2
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    I hope this turns out better, you deserve to be loved, and I would try as hard as possible to stop thinking about this matter.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 2

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    Oh honey

    This is so sad but always remember when our hearts were made they were made to hold many loves and some times we dont get te love back from another for they arent really our soul mates . In a persons life as they grow up if they dont rush love they will find the perfect soul mate for life . Too many fall in love or feel they have fallen in love when in reallity it is a form of a deep friendship instead of love .But once you grow older and find that one person that makes you truly blessed for him to even stand by you then you will see why so many of our young loves dont work out for your soul doesnt feel that special bond you see .

  • daprincess93
    November 2

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    Loosing you sleep for a guy that doesn't love you is not going to help you. I did that months ago an it didn't help it make it worst cuz it felt like he had control over my mind and even if he wasn't here with me he was in my mind all the time. Day and might. Untill it finally stuck to my head what he really wanted