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As the Swing Arcs

Air bellows as chaos flies
mind putrid with fear
while earth reaps a motion
that causes body to lurch
dangled like a puppet
on the strings of dark fate
to wherever the swing takes you.

Author notes

Hi Katie! I finally got to enter one of your competitions again! I have missed them.

just a quick explanation with this one. I have decided to try to write some really weird poetry based on one simple premise - write about something positive with negative language (or vice versa) this one is simply about a person on a swing in a park. Tell me what you think

Tootles

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