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The Tumour



My anger is solid
Turns my blood
To lead

Sharp edges catch on
Delicate places

There is not fear

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  • Annorlunda
    November 2

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    Nice work

    It was a good poem, especially this bit:

    'My anger is solid
    Turns my blood
    To lead'

    That was a great metaphor.


    • Isabel Cult
      November 2
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      Thanks! It's the first I've written in a while so I wasn't too sure :/