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Written In A Male Voice

Kiss me quickly for I fear
A put off time will never come
Ttime is precious and must be treated carefully
Here we are together
Ready to go to the next level
Always knowing the time would come
If only I would be patient
Not being that way by nature
Afraid you’re going to say “No”.

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  • wildflower. gold member
    November 11, 2009

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    [[L3 two t's in "time" not needed]]


    Aww I love this acrostic! Good imagery and it flows quite well.
    Nicely done.


    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate