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Apples and Me

There are apples on the tree.
They are just like me.
Can you see them?
Round and red.
They are just like me.
'Cept I'm dead inside and they are filla life.
I am dead inside and they are full of life.

Author notes

I think I wrote this just to prove I could do a poem about anything on call. lol And if so it's the only one I did in this manner. It's kinda sarcastic in a way. It's meant to sound like a poem by a little emo kid. lol It's so old.

So is it corny enough? lol

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  • bballer21
    November 2

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    i actually liked this poem, i think it had good meaning behind the words. even though it was supposed to be by "a little emo kid" hahah. fix "hey" to "they" in the last line, and its perfect (: