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Last Wish

I shed so heavy this sorrow
In memory of our days last
It's hard to see tomorrow
Without a hand from the past

Nights do end in deepest lament
Yet days begin with foolish hope
I follow along my tears descent
To wash away the vows you broke

Hate is a feeling I do not carry
Though pain is left when days do fade
Many memories are left to bury
Beside false promises we both have made

Before the end, I leave one last wish
Listen, but do not grieve nor cry
Grant me please, life's only bliss
To hold you close one last time

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  • findingurself.less
    November 2

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    "To wash away the vows you broke" LOVE that part! You did really good on this! But I think you know that "one last time" would never be enough...