There once was a time when i thought i could not be hurt
A time when i thought i was free of pain
A time of ultimate happiness
How could i have ever thought i was rid of all the pain
To think that i was immune to it
To hope for that which i could not really hold on to
I thought we could fix this
To go back to the way things were
And yet is seems like ages since we last talked
You won't answer my calls
You ignore me and treat me as if i don't exist
You've brought back an old pain yet it feels new
You've opened an old wound and added salt
Why did you do this to me
what is needed
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Awww Mike, I just wanna hug you
You've given a burst of emotions and imagery; you've shown a relationship where happiness was there, safely and contently and then it was snatched away to be held in front of you like teasing a toy in front of a cat
The final line is sharp and hits the heart strongly; very moving -
I am sorry this is happening to you honey, anytime you want or need to talk I'm here
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Thank you. *hugs you* this is the first poem ive written in a long while.
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If YOU ever need someone to talk to, don't forget I'm merely a text or a phone call away. Stay strong, and remember you do have worth, and you will find a girl worthy of loving you hun. Don't let today drag you down, but rather take the strength and trudge on to tomorrow!
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