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I let my nose run away

I let my nose run away
and now I don't know where it went
I think that it jumped on a car in the free-way
that I could not prevent

I tried to talk to him, to tell him not to do it
but he said he wanted to be free for a day
and begging he wouldn't quit
and he did not want to obbey.

Oh my! this is soo weird
I promise u nose,i will never paint you black
But he really dissapeared
I want my little nose back!

ok so what if my nose ran away, it will probabilly come back
I let my nose run away.. that is a fact!

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