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a pray away

Sorry we had to go
Didnt know  we wouldnt be back
It just happened in a flash
A blink and a crash
So glad you werent in the back

I know we argued 
But darling everyone does
And maybe it was GODS way of saying
It wasnt time for you
But it was for us

We are beside you in all you do
Theres no pain no sorrow just peace
Please believe it thats all one can do
We hear you
It does break my heart
But let the healing  be started
Only our bodies departed
We are so close
If you listen you will hear us

When your down and feeling blue
The best thing for you
Is pray for a better day
You have a long way to go before you are called away
We love you no less than any other day
Bless you sweet child
Now raise your head , put on a smile
Walk with GOD in your heart
We will be here waiting in the end
To be together  so let that heart mend 

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  • Su94
    November 28
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    wow this is amazing,very nice and i like the point of view


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 28
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      was a sad thing for a lovely girl who i admire for strenght and guts appreciate your reading and comment will drop by u as well cheers


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 4

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    this is stunning my dear Gleen for you are a gift of a true Gem hugs always my sweet one and thank you for sharing your heart Hugs always Angel♥


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 4
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      thank you Angel this was a special write for a lass who has been oing thru a hard time and shes brave and i had to do something spesial so ta hun bless you also xo gleen


  • WhyMeWhyMe
    November 3

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    Thanks.


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 4
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      im glad i did it for you kel i know its sad but i think this is what they would say bless you and glad you did a letter to them too proud of you for stepping up and being brave x glenn

  • LovingPhoenix
    November 2

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    What a beautiful write! There is lots of support and love oozing throughout your words! Excellent!! I am sure she will find comfort!


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 2
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      i hope so hun shes so needs us all righty now so lets hope it helps a bit bless her and you xo

  • Judith Chandler
    November 2
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    This left me with chills and the beginning of tears. Very well written. These things do come out of the blue. Maybe it's better that way.


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 2
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      Kel needs all the love and support we offer at the moment i hope this doent hurt her its meant to bring hope and light poor lass is pineing for her parents and its a very hard thing to go thru so bless her little sox best always glenn x

      • Judith Chandler
        November 2

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        It's always hard to know what to say when such things happen and I have a feeling you would never deliberately hurt someone.

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