Under the full moon,
Beneath the rising sun,
From the ashes of an old life,
We begin a new day,
Without a constant reminder,
Of the lives we once held,
Keep it in mind,
That we all have failed,
Sitting now alone in the wind,
The ash continues to rain down on our heads,
Remember the tears,
Remember the laughs,
Keeping the memories close to our hearts,
Forget the day we fought so hard,
Remember when we were close.
All I can ever say is,
That I needed you,
As you needed me.
A contest entry
- You Are My Friend; Someone Special by Heavenly Angel.
700 points, ended November 8, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Have you ever lost someone you thought you could be with forever?
Comments
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Oh wow this is a terrific write. I love it. You did an amazing job with this. Good luck in your contest and keep up the great writing! I really loved the last two lines. :]
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This was an amazing poem.
Great to read your poems.
Your a great poet. Hope to read
more of your poems.
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For some reason, I imagine two people who have spent all night laying on a roof. And just as the sun comes up, their problems are left behind, and all conflicts resolved. I like it.
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A fine sharing this is!
Thank you so much for being part of this contest
And to answer your author's notes, yes I have but when God closes one door, he so very lovingly opens another
Thank you again and best wishes!
~Heavenly~
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