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Unknown

i walked the earth lost and alone,
trapped in a world of the unknown,
walking a path not knowing where to go,
not having anyone to guide my way home.
heartaches and heartbreaks have torn me and gone,
while i continued to search for the one that i love.
people they come and people they go,
lying and cheating while my trust and love runs low.
i began to give up. i was tired of pondering and fighting,
when suddenly you walked into my life beautiful, bright,smile delighting.
i didnt know how to react or what to do.
i just couldnt believe it, i finally found you.
the light of our eyes, your smile takes hold,
while my heart beat pounds, and my pulse runs out of control.
butterflies filled my stomach while my head felt light,
the frist time i kissed you that beautiful night.
right then, that very mooment, thats when i knew.
i was deeply and truly in love with you.
i close my eyes now, and guess what i see,
my life so clear and beautiful with you there with me.

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Author: C A S S I E (cloverbarbie_1028)

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 17
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    I love this!! you sure know what to
    write to make my heart go warm and fuzzy,
    simply lovely
    love and blessings
    Rend