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Everlasting

Just another day
Sitting next to you
I think I know
What I will do
Grab your hand
Wait a minute
Wait for the kiss
That'll change my mind
About life
About us
About everything
I know I love you
Completely
& I'll never lose that thought
Of us
Together forever

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