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shotgun fishing in the wrong barrel

at some point Arynn
who is short, and lovely
and terrifically gay
told me that I'm “cute”
in the basement.
I mean, The Speakeasy
where last year
my nose caught
a fist
four, or five, or
six times.

She went on dancing in a pile of skirts
mostly her own
while I teetered in front
of the illegal bar
where no one
offered me a shot of anything.
The late nineties cover band continued
playing songs about waitresses
in coffee shops.

Stood beside the clattering pool table
and confessed my concerns to Zoey.
Slurring on about her and Taylor
how they might become
“a lesbian power couple”
causing the whole world
to crumble
under the gaze of their pretty
flecked eyes.

All the most aesthetically pleasing
people in the world
are fucking each other.
I'm in the corner
tapping my heel
to some broken drum.
Sipping on whatever you
decide to hand me
feeling listless
and brilliantly numb.

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yay, pretty girls who like pretty girls

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  • photoretinas
    November 3

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    lots of 'lol'ing because i was feeling the same thing the whole night when i saw them. they're so pretty it's crippling.


  • Weetzie bat
    November 2

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    I really love this one and I really want to hear it read out loud. The imagery is amazing


  • sixtimesseven
    November 2

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    i love this.
    coincidentally i am watching the L word at this very moment. though i paused it to read your poem.
    but yes. i am a fan of your an and the suggestion of a "lesbian power couple".


  • Between My Ears
    November 2
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    i like this, its cute


  • internal heights
    November 2
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    this is a good one. a really good one.


  • acoustical
    November 2

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    i like your an. and the social aspect of this poem.

    yeah. i like it.

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