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...The Artist...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fluted scent intoxicated from ivory chalice
on stems near wooden rows faced forward,

blasphemy etched onto bleeding limestone
with 
letters bent-broken over birth
to Soul's demise carved from calcified grin.

Coroner brushed, pasted handiwork pale
with stitched purpose sewn and threaded
through powdered kiss

he mocked in muted hues
like his other models prior.

Ebony highlights haunted fall from grace
when Voodoo chants challenged Mortality
written within symbolic gestures

coiled trees of Life over canvas

before breath captured in vase, sealed

curse assumed clear yet youth withered;
sweat dripped sweet to salt and cure fat
before beauty left outside to drain-dry.

Rigor mortis petrified message with stone
cold expressions in upper extremeties
exsanguination failed to decipher fully
but clot formed, clarified signatures written
between ironed wrinkles cellopane wrapped.

The Artist satisfied-

pushed his Masterpiece into silver mouth
with worth on slab
until day of her debut.







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  • poetryality silver member
    November 10

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    BRAVO!




    You always amaze me. Had I been the judge you would have gotten Gold as well. This is perfect as prompted by the picture which I find hauntingly beautiful just as your words. You are a master of the language. The flow is effortless and the experience I had after finishing this reading was overwhelming. Exquisite even in the darkness it has light!


    Always Loving You ♥

    Grams


  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    November 8

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    EXCELLENT!!!! You have masterfully woven one of the best pieces I have read in a good while. I would have never dreamed something so darkly beautiful to come from this prompt....I would love to tell you what my favorite lines are but I love it all....

    Thanks for entering and Good Luck in the Contest!!!


  • Jayde1
    November 6

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    wow

    this is a cool poem you have penned here...
    fantastic take on the prompt..
    nicely written throught out..

    this was my fav stanza....

    Ebony highlights haunted fall from grace
    when Voodoo chants challenged Mortality
    written within symbolic gestures


    nice work and good luck to you in z contest


    Jayde


  • Arkbear gold member
    November 6

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    Dang Sis......this is about as good as it can get with this Prompt.....I have no doubt you have captured it to its' fullest -

     

    ~ Coroner brushed, pasted handiwork pale
    with stitched purpose sewn and threaded
    through powdered kiss

    he mocked in muted hues
    like his other models prior.  ~

     

    You write so effortlessly.....there are just some Poets who can mesmerize us with a few words.....you are one of them -

     

    I'm trying to find something here to say.....you have actually left me sewn.....this has Gold all over it Des.....good luck in this contest dear one,

     

    Brother Bear -



  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    November 2
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    You will have a Picture prompt located here:

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    This Contest will be over Nov 8th - Good Luck

    Click on the picture for the link

  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    November 2
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    YOu have to pick a number on the list that isn't taken

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