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The Break Up

A slow beat coming from his heart,
with each thought of her it quickens,
uncontrolably red he sits there,
her voice comes to mind.
"Do as you wish just forgive me and forget me."
A shout came from him!
"NO! I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU!"
Fighting back tears he whispered.
"But I will always forgive you."
He stared at the dagger in his hand
"I forgave you for everything, I remember you too"
He raised the dagger over his head
"But now I am alone, never again to love,
never again to live"
He shoved the dagger deep into his heart,
His last living words were recited,
"Forgive me always and forget me not,
but from now on I will be removed from thought,
tonight is the night I die,
and I will say,
I love you,
one last time"
His breath ended and so did the beat,
no longer to love,
no longer to live.

Have you ever lost someone you thought you could be with forever?

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  • The Devil18
    November 9
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    yes its sad and this poem is sad


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    November 4

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    This has almost a Romeo and Juliet theme to it...a beautiful sadness...
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy yourself on this site!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
    Site Greeter


  • Englandgirl2008
    November 3
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    wow
    this was a really good poem.
    Almost brought me to tears.
    No joke. Great imagery to
    it as well.