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bleu

i will not discriminate you,

hyacinth houses dwell in eyes

 

the tall ones

delphinium windows

looking down spiral stairs

 

natural curves,

slender supports

where hands rest

 

and there

in the crookededgeofasmile

you fill me in

 

the cracks- so minute

spreading yesterdays

of tired coats

 

comfortably yours

 

the fit of me

 

always blue

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Allyce May gold member
    November 2

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    I'd get rid of the "s" on the end of "dwells"

    Really like the "hyacinth" and "delphinium" in this; they pertain to colour but not bluntly so.

    Loved the ending!! Those last three lines are fantastic. Yes, some things are comfortable because they've lost the life in them; become "tired". Good stuff!

    Thanks for entering

  • Allyce May gold member
    November 2
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    20 lines?!

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