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The hurtin' feeling

You were all I'd ever dreamed could be
you were everything and more to me
I had waited all my life for you
you were all my wishes coming true

Didn't you pursue me, with desires
set alive the passions and the fires
of a love I thought could never die
losing you made all love seem a lie

Do you never think of me today
am I just someone you've cast away
someone who was only for the day
how could you treat anyone this way?

I remember every moment shared
then I thought you were someone who cared
dreamed of life with you forevermore
now my life is empty like before

one day, you may lose and feel the same
then you may learn love is not a game
find yourself alone and know the hurt
then you'll finally have your just dessert

Author notes

I loved you. (I know, it sounds like I'm pouting, but this one touched a raw nerve)

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  • Excellent but very poignant. Usually when someone does another wrong they get their just desserts down the track. It may take time but it does happen. I am sorry for this tme in your life. It sure makes one wary and jaded for any further relationships.
    Best to you in this contest
    Gaylene


  • xxBlack Dawnxx
    November 2

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    i sure know the feeling of lost love and i know how much it stings,
    very sweet emoticonal poem