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Whole ( Bronze )

 

 

Erase upon tips of unturned ink

in rain splatters dashed without the dots..

even the umbrella remembers the prongs of which

pierced whole..

a memoir.

 

 

Author notes

The blank slate hungers to be written upon

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  • penman gold member
    November 10
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    Excellent

    A very descriptive and well expressed write. Congrats on the bronze


  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 4

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    Perfect. Absolutely gold-worthy piece,
    but congrats on the bronze. I love
    the finery of your thoughts,
    and how you've expressed
    yourself so candidly.

    Amazing sis!

    love ya xx


  • daviscth
    November 3

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    Congratulations on walking away with the bronze cup sis. This has wonderful imagery within the lines. You did a great job with your prompt.


  • A63-Angel
    November 3
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    simply stunning! loved this one.


  • Age of Rain
    November 3
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    Beautiful.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 2

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    hmm I really really love this one, it makes me think. yep and a lot I might add too. excellent take on the prompt Mum. very deep and thought provoking poem.

    Good luck
    Kat

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