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The spirits are free, and I must follow

The spirits are free, and I must follow,
They live in the tree, down by the hollow.
Come out in the night, dance to our sorrow,
Give all a fright, until tomorrow.

Can you use the first line to start a gothic poem. I will make a contest. G

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 2

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    For only four lines, this came out good. I like the rhyme with it being both internal and end line. Good flow as well. And the images that come to mind are cool. Good time of the year for a poem like this.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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  • bballer21
    November 2

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    i love this poem. its short, but it gets the point acrossed wonderfully. i love the rhyming! good job and keep continuing to write!