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sexual simplicity

I shiver with the vibrato of the strings
  Strung up and high strung  I strum
Skittering across the keys
  moving within those ivories
I cry within those blues
Jumping from trumpet blast
    Sliding with the bass
    I ache within the  trill
Your voice pierces my music
    You break it into another dimension of satisfaction
        Your voice teases the bass and pushes the alto
  Your sexy movements pulls the drums
    Pounding with your footfalls
      Banging with your cries
My fingers slide down your body
        Like music
    Just teasing those sigh
  Pulling those screams
I kiss those lips like the sax
  Pulling satisfaction
    Until you cry
  Screaming melodies of  pleasure
        Unlocking boundless treasure of rainbow kissed bliss
                      That arcs through your body like electricity
Baby, it’s almost too much for me
        This sexual simplicity

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  • zee91190
    November 11
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    Whoa! That was brilliantly done. Very sensual and at the same time creative.
    Thank you for your entry
    All the best


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    November 4

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    It is fascinating how music can be compared to sex and sex to music...this was well written!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy yourself on this site!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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