In my dreams, I danced amongst the roses
Their heavenly scent tantalized my senses,
My fingers brushed across their leaves,
smooth and cool to the touch.
I can still feel the sun's radiance across my skin,
Caressing every inch of me
Like a lover discovering the sensations of the flesh.
Fresh morning dew drops licked my skin,
Soaking my lustful sins to the roots.
Soft sounds escape my breath
As rose petals lightly stroke my body,
My mind in sweet euphoria.
Just before the thorny vines entangled me,
attempting to leave me in that state of orgasmic pleasures,
I awoke to my lover's body in my embrace,
a sweet smile on her face, as she dreams of roses.
A contest entry
- You Are The Love Of My Life. by Poetryintheblood.
900 points, ended November 4, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautifully soft imagery, thank you and good luck, Josie
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Thank you.
It's an honor.
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Soft sounds escape my breath
As rose petals lightly stroke my body.
It's a wonderful write with sensual, sensous, anderotic touches. You employed themetaphors beautifully. Every line of the poem is so enjoyable.
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