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Sweet Surprise

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Baby, do I have a sweet surprise for you
You just lie back and enjoy the view
I’m gonna work some magic all over you

Slips this dress off and it hit’s the floor
Hands lift breast and bends over
Smiles, you want more?

Next the panties fall away
This warm moist body
She wants to play

Hand brushes across heavens gate
Other finds the soft breast await
Slowly walking over your way

Gonna purr across your heated skin
Leans in to lick your lips
Hands slide down your tummy

Watches as your thighs tighten
Hardness builds
Eyes glaze

Tongue travels where hands has been
Hair cascades all around
Breast nipples touches thighs

Nuzzles into your heat
Warmth of breath
Nectar seeps

I hear you softly sigh


Relief…  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 4

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    Lovely composed...


    On the garden of sensuality flowers of libidinal petals diffuse the scent of passion, and a bouquet of desires is a "Sweet Surprise" for the privileged guest to the Castle of Venus.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


    • PurringKitten silver member
      November 4
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      Andre ben-YEHU

      awwww how very sweet..your comment is wonderfully poetic...thank you kind sir


  • Sara Khan
    November 3
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    Starts nicely and ends skilfully. Excellent write!

  • sanjay kanna
    November 3

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    Nice and sensual poem!

    Your words are very nice to enjoy. Short and really Sweet!


  • carl dunford
    November 2

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    The sweetest of surprises are the best ,sensual and erotic pure.
    loved it.


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    November 2

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    Steamyyyyyyy!!!!

    Very tastefully sensual...Brilliant penning
    Your word choice here is amazing; nice metaphors to replace actual sexual body parts..splendid imagery through your descriptive words..
    "Next the panties fall away
    This warm moist body
    She wants to play"
    In its simplicity, this is purrrrfect..very sexy and enticing..you have the reader begging for more..I know "Your Voice" will adore this as well
    Write On!...David


    • PurringKitten silver member
      November 2
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      Poetic-Theorem

      smiles...thank you David thats just the sweetest comment and yes my Voice did like it


  • The Voice Of One silver member
    November 2

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    wow o' wow o' wow....................my kitten is really purring now, good style, hot style, damn fine perfect style..
    You feed me well, a feast of delicate morsels unbound, unchained and all mine,,,,,,,,
    This was just out of this world babes, completely what was dreamt, offered and given,,,

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