11:22 2 November 2009 Monday
M: Stable
P: Living Room
insurmountable drought of virtue
children play with drugs
smoked-out head intervention
trying to save salvation
the fearless are dying
11:26
Author notes
Its sad to know our youth need drugs to achieve a mental height.
Kristy
A contest entry
- Five Lines of Whatever #3 by Heavenly Angel.
550 points, ended November 2, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any Merit? Any Constructive Criticism? Any Thought? Meaningful comments please.
Comments
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I have to agree 100% with your author's notes
It is so very sad
A fine and powerful write this is; thank you so much for sharing and for being part of this contest! -
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Thank you, thank you very much.
In appreciation,
Kristy
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