Life is falling
Moments lost in shadows
Can I make it?
Or will the world try to break it?
Can anybody hear me?
Does anybody even see?
Running in the fog
Falling all around
The love I used to feel....
The feelings left behind...
Does anybody hear me?
Does anybody even see?
Urges calling
Dreams are falling
All everything does anymore..
Is falling away...
I'll run away...
Far away...
Start anew...
Without all of this...
Author notes
i cant take it anymore... all the feelings... everything building up... i just want to .... go back to my old ways... anything to feel better...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is how i feel, but i know from experience that running away doesn't solve those problems, because they just creep slowly along, until they catch up to you. i'm here if u need to talk, and i loved the poem.
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Oh my goodness!
that is exactly how I FEEL! my life has fallen apart and there is nothin that I can do about it. I really really really badly wish that I could go back to the old days, because those where my good days. Not the best but better than this. My feelings are all messed up because of the things that I'm going tru. I encourage you to go to PoetryPoem.com and read my poems. Vianey Salgado. My site title is Inner Secluded Thoughts. Check it out.

