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Urge

The love we share
Comes from time we borrow
To keep it confined
Only to sustain the sorrow

When my eyes opens
They want to see you
My body filled with void
Tell me what can I do?

Our lips merge
At once you make me entire
The strongest urge
Burns up like fire

I see you within my eyes
Your voice echoes in my ear
And what I truly dispise
When I miss you the most
You aint there..

My baby.. Our love is rare

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