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Just Love, Nothing More

this is love
this is what love is like
that repeeating nonsense
the dull ache
the craving for more
but always it being enough

this is love

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im bored. i'm at uni. i want my bed...

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 24
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    Ah...

    to be young & looking to explain love's many dimensions! Being bored at Uni can make you want your bed & You might want to revisit this line:

    "that repeeating nonsense"...no spell check, or did you do that on purpose? Double e for emphasis on repeating? I'm past bed time. Took my meds & feel really Take my word for it LOVE is much more.


  • Shaded DevilFox gold member
    November 3

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    I want your bed to sweetness....... Love you...


  • EternallyAlone
    November 2

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    this poem does not sound bored. In fact, I like it. Very true. Love is sometimes very over rated, and this is what it really is at it's core.

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