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Hidden Scorpion

i'm the moon
in the day-
you can't see me,
but i'm here.
always nere.
i crouch
behind the Maiden,
sting upraised-

unnoticed
until
underfoot

Author notes

i'm a virgo with a scorpio moon.

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