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first attempt at a triolet

I hear the birds singing their songs.
I feel the warm sun beating down.
I know it must set before long.
I hear the birds singing their songs.
No one can tell me it's wrong
to stop for a beautiful sound.
I hear the birds singing their songs.
I feel the warm sun beating down.

Author notes

like the title says.

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