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Falling Down

Must I say that I really need you?
When all you see is me falling,
Your people became so untrue,
And now I'm not even breathing,

I see your face as I close my eyes,
And as I fall my tears remain,
Untouched on the blue skies,
The clouds that hide my pain,

I'm wishing you would come and save me,
Jump down and catch me as I fall,
I'm trying hard but I can only see,
The elaborate lies that started it all,

I'm sorry though I may not always be,
The perfect person to be the one for you,
Even your world sees me as ugly,
You are the only one who knows I'm true.

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  • I'm wishing you would come and save me,
    Jump down and catch me as I fall,
    I'm trying hard but I can only see,
    The elaborate lies that started it all,

    I really loved these lines. You did an amazing job on this. Great write and keep up the great writing!!

  • izzy1804
    November 2
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    Aww sad but good...Very good write