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Instructional Triolet

This is Line Number One.
This is Line Number Two.
Boy, Triolets are fun!
This is Line Number One.
Oh, look- we're almost done!
I'm very proud of you.
This is Line Number One.
This is Line Number Two.

Author notes

this is the demonstration of the poetic form called the Triolet. i wrote it to help myself write a real one. Lines one and two repeat, in the following pattern (i have added the rhyme scheme to make the whole thing easier to understand):

line1, A
line2, B
line3, A
line1, A
line4, A
line5, B
line1, A
line2, B

i wouldn't be aware of the existence of the triolet, though, if it weren't for Holly at severalbees.com. her example of the triolet is more poetic than mine, and much cooler; but i wanted something to act more as a template for myself.

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