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You make me

You make me do crazy things
that makes me fall in love
Things that most won't try
doing the things I dream of

You make me go crazy baby
each time you tease me there
Look at the spell I'm under
is there a secret you can share?

You make me want you tonight
You make me so dizzy & lost
You make me want to cry
You make me love...despite the cost

You make me feel something new
a feeling that takes all control
For everyone's noticed me here
How I wished that you needed me so

So there's eyes longing to know
what it's like to find...love's reality?
It's the emotions swelling...I'll find
It's falling in love...oh how you...make me!

David

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  • lovelustre
    November 3

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    Bravo!

    You are controlling me sweetly with your words...of love!

  • thinker
    November 2

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    "you make me love... despite the cost" - oh what a beautiful line. So simple yet so clear. I can really relate to that pain that runs along with love..