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Flowers

I've seen the Gardner's hand
Upon the many flower beds
That adorn my Mother's Garden
With it's beautiful Roses Red

There are also many colors
Of Roses that bloom each spring
Their beauty  has no end
Oh What smiles they do bring

The gardner is the one
Who helps the flower to bloom
He gets so many hugs from
All the people in the room

They've gathered for a wedding
Being held in the Garden room
Well do my eyes decieve me
The one who nourished the Roses is the Groom

 

He's wearing a Rose in His lapel

He's very dashing at a glance

Now he and his new wife

Hold a rose as they happily dance to romance

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  • Griswold silver member
    November 21

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    How did you know Roses will be the flowers of the day for wedding, Tory just loves Roses. Yellow ones at that, bet the bridesmaids will be in yellow too.. Thank you for entering and best of luck... Scott


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 20

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    well,
    this was a interesting piece.
    I feel in many areas the rythm was forced
    as was the using of the rose.
    Over all the piece brought a smile but
    as i have read a piece or two from you
    i believe your all wasnt put forth.
    Just my opinion of course and not meaning
    no harm.

    Good luck to you in the contest

    Passionspromise


    • Katie Lazette
      November 20
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      You are right. Sometimes I just write to write, not really concentrating on a subject. My Mother had lots of flowers blooming in our back yard, front yard, and on both sides of the house. She loved flowers and loved sharing them with neighbors. For my sister's wedding she grew the gladiolas for her wedding. We made armfull sprays and tied them with beautiful ribbons. We girls carried them in the wedding. We got a lot of compliments too. There were three of us girls and we all had a big Church Wedding. My two brothers also had big weddings. We had candlelight weddings.