Dear, the one who stole my heart.
Loving you was never easy; crying deeply into the night thinking you’d come in and save me. Waiting for loving arms to come and whisk me away into a much sweeter reality.
Never to dream of a bad future, never to see through crying eyes once more. You were the one for me…
Pacing up and down the room, I knew you were right. I knew you would be the one to love me like no one else could. Spill your precious heart out to me, and let me place my hands on it, never to let go from ‘Heaven’ again.
Months passed, still all the commotion was the same. Still your heart hadn’t come undone and gave itself to me. Still you hadn’t confessed your feelings to me, like I thought you would have.
Dying inside now, I tried to search for that one possible answer. When really it was lingering in my intoxicated mind somewhere deep inside… buried away. Carrying on as just ‘friends’ my heart was becoming somewhat weaker to the world. Slowly building a few walls with no way of ever opening up again.
Drifting into a world of loneliness, hate and anger. I was slowly losing you and everything else that made ‘us’ who we were. ‘Friends’…possibly all we could be. But I knew I was losing you and you know what? There was nothing I could do to stop it.
Losing hope never became so much easier with you around. My heart managed to die out piece by piece, vessel by vessel. I hope you enjoyed seeing me break down like that; it was all you needed. Like the icing on the cake. I guess for me miss-reading emotions caused a big thing, but for you; you just spun me into a web of lies slowly but surely. Knowing you would have caused me such damage. Only to break someone’s heart, treat it as if were your toy to play with.
Author notes
I.don't.know.
How to feel.
A contest entry
- Dark Poetry Contest by Sweetest-Maleficia.
950 points, ended November 19, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Round 2: OPEN FOR EVERYONE!!! AS WELL AS FINALISTS! by lesbian-in-love.
775 points, ended November 21, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is how I feel..
Comments
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This was an amazing write, but I did not think it was right for this specific contest.
It's not making the finalist list was no bearing on the quality of this piece as I thought it was very well written.
My apologies and good work on this poem -
A very deep and emotional cry. The imagery is so sad and heartbreaking. I hate it when people use others. Don't give up.
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I don't usually like pieces that are written like this but I liked the emotions in it. It was very good and enjoyable to read. Your going on to round 3. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest.
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awww
ssssss for my cuppycake. i felt your deep sadness and pain...
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awuh =[[[
i like the last paragraph thingy.
very poignant
but sad
<<<<<3
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Thankyou bean. <3loveyou.
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awwah =[ *cling* <3
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<333
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