510 horses racing at our luxury
Under my powerful
Exploration of such tight
Curves and pure
Satisfaction as the soft
Texture of this lucious
Experience
Consumed us
Offer your interpretation.
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interesting write..
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It was a most interesting experience.
Thank you for your comment :-)
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Short, sexy and sweet.
The language use was very good indeed. Every word seemed like it had been chosen after much deliberation, in order to make the poem explode with a raw electricity. The descriptions were good, the first line was excellent and you packed a lot into such a short space. Very impressive work.
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I paid due attention to the word use in this piece for the exact reason you noted; I wanted to share the rawness, the passion, and the furious power of the experience with an audience. Such an explosive degree of "electricity" is something one only comes across so many times throughout life, as certain powerful experiences demand heightened emotional and psychological responses.
Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment :-)
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