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Let It Be

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How are we to know

we cannot see,

Your light it brings us sight

Your light  it sets us free.

Stumbling ,falling in  our mind

all our senses leave us blind,

we must stand still in time.

 

 

 

                                                           Let it be...

 

 

 Come what may

is how we grow,

teach us 

what we need to know,

Mold us, shape us

at  Your will

an  empty  vessel

is Yours to fill.

 

 

 

                                                      Let it be...

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 16

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    Marv!

    Congrats on the trophy! This is such a wonderful write. It flows like butter. Great content, timing & rhyme! Bravo for this & Just what I needed to read right now.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    November 16

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    amen..shaping and molding is the constant journey .,.and we are already doing this journey ..sometimes through the words..and sometimes through the meditation as well..wonderful work..


  • penman gold member
    November 11
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    Excellent

    what a terrific write. So full of truth and well written. Best of luck in the contest


  • Aiswarya T Anish
    November 8

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    Beautiul! This is indeed true. All our senses leave us blind.....so true. We are the clay and He is the Potter. The most efficient Potter. Wonderful, so thought-provoking and true. Keep penning.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 5

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    I love the message your brought Kathy for he is the Potter and we are the clay .. mold me make me in your own image.. stunning this piece of wisdom in heart Hugs Always Angel♥


  • Nicada silver member
    November 4

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    This is such a positive and uplifting poem with a strong message of hope and faith. To "let it be" is wise advice for this life for we are not in control. Very nice message here! Blessings, Patty


  • Providence
    November 3
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    Three of the wisest words every uttered...

    "Let it be"

    No negative energy created there! lol

    Excellent work!

    Bravo!

    Marianne


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 3
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    You are right, empty vessels need filling up, cause they make such a terible noise
    Good luck in the contest, well done.


  • drifting cloud silver member
    November 3

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    I like this form. This is a real uplifting read - nice job. 'Our senses leave us blind' - indeed, they focus on the physical, blind to the spiritual. - Now, you've got the Beatle's song 'Let It Be' humming through my mind!

    Thanks for the light you gave us today. - Bonita


  • humblpye gold member
    November 3

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    How are we to know...'tis true, we are too restless running to and fro I don't think we even have a clue what we're looking for most of the time...when we stop and let the machinery of the mind slow down, become empty again,that is when we start finding, some say there's nothing to find but they've never given god a chance to show that there is...so much, and once you've had a taste...well, it's like watching an investment grow, isn't it?

    It's the pause that refreshes!!
    Thanks for sharing
    John


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 2
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    Simply stunning! A very beautiful piece of art you have penned here friend. I love it's rhythmic beauty. ~gypsy~


  • Jalalbad gold member
    November 2

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    Let it be is waiting upon the Lord. To stand in time is saying peace be still? This is what I got out of your poem though I may be wrong?
    If I am I love it anyway and wishing you the very very best the contest has to offer. What a great friend I've found in you rainbow. You are faithful, serious, sincere and loyal. I feel there is not an evil bone in your body.
    much love,
    Judy

  • goalsv
    November 2

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    Wonderful piece. A very poetic way to show that What is empty God fills and molds. A very good way to show us all that God is our light and leads our way. So full of faith.


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 2

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    SO TRUE AND TOUCHING

    I feel most of us believe but also just go on and don't stop to understand and learn. It is in the slowing down , looking around where we see, learn and understand many things about life and the world around us. Always keeping faith and love alive within as we do.. 's


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    November 2
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    Oooh! I love this "and empty vessel is Yours to fill" Love that.. Good luck in your contest!


  • ourgirlFriday
    November 2
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    Fantastic, Pisces! I sincerely hope you place first!!!!!


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 2

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    Very honest piece here, full of truth and direction. The title reminded me of the Beetle's song and caught my attention right away. I am a huge admirer of your work it is very inspiring and motivating. Thank you for sharing


  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    November 2

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    Sweet surrender....

    .....and complete acceptance of that loving Gift. Faith is the only coin called for, trust in the One Love that is ours to receive as we give...


  • Rovingone gold member
    November 2
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    Ah, that sounds just like a hymn. I could just hear the music and feel the soul running through it. A total blessing.


  • Simply Olivia
    November 2
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    Great poem


  • Denerica silver member
    November 2

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    Amen...just come fill us Oh Lord...once again...you captured that surrender, that trust in Him to simply " let it be". Loved it of course sis. Excellent. Blessings.

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