Forget me now
as you look death in the eyes,
As I reach for your embrace
I’m planning your demise.
Slowly my embrace will swallow you whole
with your head upon my chest,
Listening to a fake heart beat
you are now under my caress.
My addicting kisses have you seduced,
My precious smile has you confused.
I engulf my hands around your heart
and slowly deteriorate your soul,
My passion is a deadly grip
and I’m never letting go.
Holding your body
your memories start to fade,
I’m slowly killing you with infectious passion
and now you’re dead where you lay.
My deadly touch was the killing blow.
My quality face, you will forever hold.
As you reach eternal slumber
now its time to say:
Forget me now,
as death closes your eyes.
Author notes
Okay.. I know this is a tad bit dark... but my friend gave me the Idea.
Anyways..
I tried for Imagery, Imagery of a Siren Killing her victim through False Love.
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A contest entry
- Come One, Come All. by Bean Sidhe.
1200 points, ended November 4, 25 entries
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Come One, Come All Contest Judging
1. Poetic Device - 7/20
2. Theme and Emotional Connection - 5/10
3. Creativity - 8/20
4. Vocabulary - 8/15
5. Title Relation - 10/10
6. Bonus Points for "It" Factor - 10/25
TOTAL: 48/100
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