3 years
3 years, 4 months and 29 days
3 years, 4 months, 29 days, 6 hours, 36 minutes and 19 seconds
that's how long it's been since you left me.
Yet whose counting?
3 years
3 years since the day you gave me the ring
3 years, 5 months, 3 hours and 4 seconds
thats how long it's been since you gave me a promise of forever
but I'm not counting.
3 years
3 years, 4 months and 29 days
3 years, 4 months, 29 days, 6 hours, 36 minutes and 19 seconds
that's how long it's been since you shattered my heart
since you dissapeared and left me broken
but of course I'm not counting.
1 year
1 year and 7 days
1 year,7 days, 18 hours, 48 minutes and 2 seconds
that's how long it's been since I found him
since he came to ease the hurt and make me live again.
Of course I'm counting.
Your hold on my heart broke
the second he stepped into my life
I truely began to laugh again
and I truely became happy.
I didn't have to try to hide my pain
he knew he saw
I know longer locked myself in my room to cry
he understood and he loved.
Your pictures burn without remorse
as I burn away the painful memories.
1 year, 7 days, 18 hours, 48 minutes and 2 seconds
that's how long I have been free of you
that's how long he has loved me.
Author notes
this is more of a moving on poem showing my love how much he has done for me in the one year we have been together.
A contest entry
- Prewrites :) Yes, as many as you like, but hell this wont be simple. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended November 3, 1103 entries
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Wonderful
I love this, it really sounds like you put all your heart and sould into creating it -
This is so deep people dont seem to care when they hurt you. When a ring comes into play, and they break your heart you feel as though you will never be happy again. I know that all to well. This was a wonderful poem the way you count the time that passes adds a lot to this. Good luck in the contest SH
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would you believe me if I told you that the count down was real? At the time I wrote the poem that was the exact amount of time... and that was like a month ago lol
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