She grew to know the idea of him in her own mind.
That is all.
And cried as he threatened to leave.
Before they had met.
Like Christ the Messiah,
Not Christ the man.
He failed to impress after their little tryst.
And finally the pedestal was toppled.
And that bright fire was put out long before
It could scorch her heart.
What did you think
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it is easy to envision someone the way you'd have them to be,
and a whole new ballgame when executing that transformation. It is better to let go what you know won't work verses prolonging the inevitable...as hard as that sometimes can be.
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I think for a small write that is very profound! I've read it twice now and yes profound is the word I'd use! excellent!
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Such a touching write. I hope this is just fiction and not something that has happend that you may regret one day.
Your a wonderful writer!
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Oh my god, that is sooooo sad, did this, like happen to somebody you know? It's as if if was on personal experience that just a made up story
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