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As Love Trembles

© Sandra M.Veinot
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I want your hands upon me
your lips to taste mine.
These emotions to become one
with the passion of thine.

My heart runs in desires
flaming out wild heated longings.
Must be just the way you
move me in these fired risings.

I want you more than
the words know how to speak.
Thay're just the trembles
formed in this female heartbeat.

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  • Sharon Marie gold member
    November 7

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    Very nice indeed

    You want to have God's words upon your lips, His word taste and see that the Lord is good His word becomes our own He's the passion in our lives, I love your poem for it's truth how many people of God sometimes miss the mark. to desire him more then the words speak knowing his presence even in those dark places, when we think he's not there  we must keep trusting by faith alone and not trust our feelings.Even when we doubt he  always proves he is faithful he cannot deny himself . Lovely poem Sandra keeping sharing the wonderful message of the love of Christ, I see you have just about the whole book of John written here at AP.

     

    Hugs

    Sharon


  • tomisb
    November 4

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    How fragile we are. How large and powerful the emotions and desires we contain. Alone and yet aware that we are best expressed when we have a partner to share.
    Well said.
    Peace & Light,
    Tom B.

  • Wow. Heated wanting certainly runs through this verse.
    Your last stanza should perhaps be corrected for proper grammar which will be
    sent via IM in accordance with your instructions.

    An excellent expression of lustful desire. Thank you for sharing. ~The Blue Lamp


  • Musimwa
    November 2
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    Wow

    Great love piece here. Keep it up. Gday