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Crush





my heart is hollow,
clear thuds echoing
all around its chambers...
thud thud thud,
its redness creeping
up toward my cheeks
as you walk right past.





Author notes

Missed writing poetry. I haven't written in a while...

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  • Virgoan
    November 17
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    The softer side of the youth is very much felt in reading this piece. The word 'crush' was well exemplified in this short, brief poem.

    A very cute poem poet.

    Thanks and regards,

    Hensley