Oh God
there is a guideline to figure out the farness
between you and me and that guideline is the faith,
my faith in you and your faith in me
maybe we are naive for one another
maybe we do trust in each other yet, whenever you test
I am missing and when I verify, you are not placed
I know the reason behind is the remoteness between us
and that is because of the violations by me
while you were always attainable with all your colors and sublimity
Oh God...
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- Picture Prompt by Pisces rainbow.
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Insightful!
This line,
“my faith in you and your faith in me”,
particularly struck me. This faith, the infinite continuum.
Howard
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Beautiful thoughts for the picture prompt
Thought provoking well penned
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The innocent child like humility you share in this write makes such an impact to the reader " my faith in you and your faith in me"
as always you portray yourself as the student, the son ever learning from the Master....Father God...Bravo!
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so true....
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Very well written & so true.
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i love the feeling and emotion in this poem. the picture is magnificent and i like that you write about what is in your heart, because sometimes when we describe what we feel rather than what we see, the end product is brilliant.
thank you for sharing this
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I am so touched and inspired by these words of yours. This one line wakes one to reality because so many are like this [maybe we are naive for one another] We do get used to counting on Him instead of trying to work things through then thanking God for His gracious help. Hood luck and thanks for sharing. Rose
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I know the reason behind is the remoteness between us
and that is because of the violations by me
while you were always attainable with all your colors and sublimity
it seems this says it all
when you arrive here
in this place of humilty
and see God has never left we have
but even so His promise is everlasting
and when we walk home there He will be
How blessed are we?
quite a pleasure to read
Thank you my friend
God bless you...
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