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Fall, Crash and Burn

It hangs on hip
dragging heels
sharp into the ground
of contentment.

I can fore-go all
of this yet it brings a sick
comfort to now its there;

sadness swoons by
its own shattered
windows,

trying to understand
courage and its plights

trying to reenact the
fury of the lion's
roar;

the jaunt and leap
of panther, as it
fearlessly draws
night and the mysteries
within it.

There is passion that
brews in this flesh,
 

pleading to any ears in the universe
to give a sign,

that all will be fine
even as I fall, crash
and burn.

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prompt: Metaphorical Dark

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  • InMyFlames
    November 11

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    this flows really well for a free write poem.
    i love the ending thats the part i struggle with most but you have done it really well!

    "that all will be fine
    even as I fall, crash
    and burn."

    thanks for your entry, i love it


  • awannabepoet
    November 2

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    Release the inner beast, there is no time to worry, no moment to fear for your strength and passion will carry you through the deepest of nights.

    If it was to live in a metaphor I would live through shifting repetitions of female sexuality.


  • LifeEndsNow
    November 2

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    Awesome is really all I can say to describe this poem yet being nice I'll go on lol I really like the darkness of the write it brings a nice mood into the poem which makes it pretty awesome so great job and keep penning

    -Kevin