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Morris The Minke Whale

Morris the Minke Whale lives in my garage, he wears

A bow tie round his neck.

He snacks on Mackerel, Shrimp and cod, but his

Favourite is redi-brek



But Morris grew too big for his tank and his bow tie

Became tatty and torn.

So we took him back to the Ocean again

The ocean where he was born.



Now once every summer we se Morris at his

New house near an ancient wreck.

And he still loves porridge, shrimp mackerel and cod and

His bow tie is still round his neck.

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