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In A Time Of Parting

The angels gathered round my soul
the night you died.
They sang me songs of comfort
as they laid you low.

The tears were as soft petals
that stated all of love.
I couldn't sing to you no more
so the angels sang to me.

The nights became as days
it didn't really matter.
It was all the same some how
as inward was the gaze.

You are with the saints now
they have your love.
I still have to wait some more
til time falls through the clouds.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    November 2

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    SO SWEET AND TOUCHING!!!

    I believe most of us have been witness to the passing of a loved one , tears flow, heart aches, but also in the sweet and happy memories there lies a certain peace, comfort knowing they are no longer hurting and one day together you and them will be again.


  • Musimwa
    November 2
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    Nice piece. Good use imagery. Keep it up.