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We paint the sky with forgotten things.






there are some times where i wish i could freeze the world; where we can move but the time never changes. we belong to a generation where the technology could be created but people would fear it and destroy the world if they were given a chance. a simple blink and the life of many is torn - especially the life that seems to engulf you.


i'd say that i can save you, that i'd be able to say the right words and understand chaos that brings forward months of questionable relevance to what humans shouldn't go through.

but i wouldn't want to be a liar.










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Just some thoughts that came from today.

1782/50,000 for NaNo.

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  • satans-daughter
    November 14
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    thats amazing lovely!! i love the drama and emotion in this poem, i got so drawn in that i felt as if i was in ur P.O.V amazing!!!!!!! XD

    your pixie <3


  • Not-The-Sun gold member
    November 12
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    i'd say that i can save you, that i'd be able to say the right words and understand chaos that brings forward months of questionable relevance to what humans shouldn't go through.

    but i wouldn't want to be a liar.


    so powerful, i love your tone in this piece. your words flow with thoughts, emotions, and honesty. the title drew me in : )
    "^^ didn't like it? back button is up there ^^ " I loved it


  • Kiss the girl--x
    November 7

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    this is amazing, i just stumbled upon you by accident, but i'm about to do the typical and attempt to read everything ever thing

    i love your last line, it's so so powerful


  • tragedy-awaits
    November 5
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    i don't want to be a liar.
    w0w!


  • Sir Squigglim
    November 3

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    Absolutley gorgous.




    justthoughtyoushouldknow.


  • Coloured Skies
    November 2

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    Oh awesome stuffs! I likes.
    But can I be dumb now and ask; what NaNo is? >.< lol.

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