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family feuds on wider screen-------------

Our idiot box
airs so many family feuds
on wider screen
in multiple serials
which naturally make my heart ,
mind and soul go extremely sick
and pluck my delight's wick

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  • amnouup
    November 8

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    Well said

    Very true I feel yuck even to listen their names, after six months also story remains at same place, feel sick of over acting and hyper emotions :-)


  • HereComesTheSun
    November 6
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    i loved the title minus the ---
    i feel you did a great job setting up the piece with the title
    thanks for entering