Heart be still, and desires kept secret
while lead to His lair; with toys on display.
Whips, chains, and plugs; a sensual bouquet;
yet, He knows the passions within His pet.
Splayed open; His eyes will never forget;
she is His ultimate, pleasure buffet.
Writhing, she cries out in her own dismay;
spreader bar tight and she is dripping wet!
Held open and bound, with no where to go;
whether joining ankles, legs, arms or wrists
He knows her passion has begun to flow.
He admires; she knows why she exists;
in dominance her submission will grow
within the spreader bar if He insists!
Author notes
An Italian sonnet is composed of an octave, rhyming abbaabba, and a sestet, rhyming
cdecde or cdcdcd, or in some variant pattern, but with no closing couplet.
Usually, English and Italian Sonnets have 10 syllables per line, but Italian Sonnets can also have
11 syllables per line.
A contest entry
- Season 10 (round 4) by Master Ktulu.
400 points, ended November 18, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
All comments are welcome!
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Now this is one very well written sonnet. I loved it.
spelling/grammar/puntuation- 20
All seems to be perfect here. The use of capitalization to acknowlege the role of Dominant is not always nessessary as I have found out, but for scoring purposes I leave that up to each individual.
presentation and creativity- 20
I think this is a perfect piece.
how well you handled the challenge=20
grab me=20
overall=20
Congrats to you this is awesome!
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Thanks so much!
The rounds in this contest are challenging and stretching my limits as a poet, and i appreciate that very much!!! -
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Well, I am happy that you are enjoying these challenges
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WOW! Nice write!
um.....yeah....gotta go grab a smoke.
Peace
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wow
uniquely paired passion that is written all over this poem..I loved the pairing concept...very few can ge the way you do describe..where it does..its champagne all the way..... -
Marvelous.....
He knows her passion has begun to flow.
He admires; she knows why she exists;
in HIS dominance her submission will grow
within the spreader bar if He insists!
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I think for such a visually unappealing toy...(sorry if some disagree with me
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that you made this sound really pretty and intriguing ...
I find lines 5-8 very lovely indeed.
best of luck to you!
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Great job, lil, wonderful rhyming! Much luck to you
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Now that is one well written sonnet for this challenge. I like how well you have it done, and the spreader bar is one that will allow Him any view He wants of His pet.
Best of luck to you with this.
Riftkin
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mmmm spreader bars-locking buckles-stilettos with high straps, and something sexy for her of course. Look forward to seeing this.
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